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What do you think of aziznatour.com

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10-15-2010, 11:27 AM
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Hello,

I recently launched my portfolio, some features are still under development tho

Please let me know what you think, feedback and criticism appreciated.

www.aziznatour.com

Looking forward to hearing your responses
Regards,
Aziz Natour

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10-20-2010, 12:03 PM
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Found
The document has moved here.

Additionally, a 500 Internal Server Error error was encountered while trying to use an ErrorDocument to handle the request.

There is error so try again

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thanks, try now..

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Site isn't coming up for me. Sorry.

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Originally Posted by Steve-Hostirian View Post
Site isn't coming up for me. Sorry.
that's odd...it's working fine for me. could you please explain the issue and tell me what browser you are using? also, try cache-refreshing

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Works for me.

Looks good, nice to see someone who doesn't fall into that same generic design pattern.

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it is Great

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Well, it workes for me now and I have to say, it looks fabulous. First impression was that it was one of the better sites I've seen in some time. I wouldn't have a tab for a blog if it isn't online yet though.

Good job ... outstanding.

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Looks really good! Here's some things you might want to consider:

1.) I think the logo would look better in color, perhaps Blue to match all of your button hovers.

2.) Try some font embedding on the four black buttons. The italicized Tahoma(?) looks a bit jagged.

3.) For the box where it says "Awesome people I've worked with", I was expecting each of those logos to be buttons with hover effects. Maybe that'd be something you might want to change?

4.) The text and icons for each button on your navigation bar needs to go up one or two pixels.

That's about all I've got for you. I can tell by your detail that you haven't been designing for very long (by this I mean you've got a lot of techniques/styles to learn) but you've definitely got some great skills and an awesome eye for art.

You're going to be very successful if you stick with designing, I promise.

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