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09-10-2005, 12:39 AM

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[WIP] Contest Entry at SP - Please Critique.

Hey guys

This is an entry in progress for a contest over at sitepoint.

Please critique what I have so far.

EDIT - Please Critique the site here: http://talkfreelance.com/thread6072.html

http://www.one-imagination.com/gotw/header.jpg

09-10-2005, 12:41 AM

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So far so very good, the only thing I would change is the navigation text placed on the blue background. Make it pure white

09-10-2005, 01:18 AM

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making it pure white makes it very difficult to read.

That was my initial nav.

I had to add the gradient to make it a bit more ledgible (sp).

Thank you for the feedback and encouragement.

09-10-2005, 02:24 AM

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Originally Posted by oneimedia

making it pure white makes it very difficult to read.

That was my initial nav.

I had to add the gradient to make it a bit more ledgible (sp).

Thank you for the feedback and encouragement.

sure but making it more blurry isn't more effective. you need to look over that area again..

*edit* light grad on light bg makes it blurry thats what i mean.

09-10-2005, 03:19 AM

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Looking good. I'm going to have some competition..

09-10-2005, 11:15 AM

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Contrast is lacking on the blue navigation.

You also have a different saturated blue on the top right clouds area, match it to the navigations saturation.

09-10-2005, 03:59 PM

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You can close this thread if you all would like -

Please critique the site here:

http://talkfreelance.com/thread6072.html