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Whats wrong about or missing from this design?

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06-22-2012, 12:35 AM
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06-26-2012, 09:00 PM
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The logo should be moved to the right more to align with the text. I think that the major chunk of text that you have there should come below the picture, and if possible shorten the text to a few taglines.

Arrows on the picture almost blend in, I couldn't tell it was a slider until I looked at the pic full screen. I'd prolly put them on either side. I think the font is a bit too bold for my taste too, and not the best shade of green - but if that's their logo and the colours you have to use then I understand.

I'd also fix up the top menu bar, it's not a perfect rectangle and maybe a tad bit too fat. See if taking away the shadow on the left helps too - or maybe make it symmetrical.

Hope this helps!
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thanks!

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The design looks good to me. But there seems to be a mistake with the position of your page tabs and the banner. They should be exchanged.

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