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07-23-2007, 04:42 PM
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I havn't made a lot of vector in my life, but decided to do a personal one =]

Things i can say my self, hair sucks > Eyebrows suck.

But i like the rest =P What you think? Got potential?

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i really like the hair not keen on the eyebrows but the rest is awesome and very good for a amateur. Alot better than i could do Keep it up

07-23-2007, 05:33 PM
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Looks awesome the only thing i dont like is the eyebrows give them more depth Hair looks great though.

07-23-2007, 05:44 PM
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hair is always a pain in the ass.
for now i'd say it's done enough, but if you find your self bored at time, just throw on one or two highlights/shadows until it feels more complete.

* needs a background
* the kerning on your name is messed.

07-23-2007, 05:45 PM
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kerning? =P

07-23-2007, 06:18 PM
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the ears bug me the most, much of it is good however.

07-23-2007, 06:27 PM
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Kerning is the spacing between letters Charllie

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You have some issues with your head. If you look at your jaw line into your ears it goes to the front but if you go above your ears to your hair they two areas don't line up. I understand they may be slightly different but right now I think its a little bit too much. Also you may want to add some shadowing to it which may fix it, I'm not sure to be honest.

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Sorry, i didnt get..

"If you look at your jaw line into your ears it goes to the front but if you go above your ears to your hair they two areas don't line up."

Could you rephrase it?

Cheers jeff (Y) - derek, whats messed with them ?

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I like it, the only thing that looks a little weird are the ears, but everything is pretty good. I wish I even new how to do this lol.

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