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[Work In Progress] Personal page

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10-13-2006, 02:20 AM
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Hey everyone,
Lately I've been wanting to do up a personal page where I can keep some info about me, my c.v as well as a list of services and previous work.

The design in my eyes isn't important, but am looking for critque anyway specifically on the structure.

http://www.jeffandersen.org

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10-13-2006, 02:27 AM
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The only huge problem I see is that you forgot to mention Bennett and kontruct. Other than that I believe its a great website. Very clean and right to the point.

10-13-2006, 02:28 AM
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Looking pretty good man. Kind of mono-tone, you know? Maybe try adding a brighter color in there. I'd say a brighter orange, maybe a yellow. Not red, with the white text it'd be too patriotic looking, haha. Keep it up though man.

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Originally Posted by Legit
Looking pretty good man. Kind of mono-tone, you know? Maybe try adding a brighter color in there. I'd say a brighter orange, maybe a yellow. Not red, with the white text it'd be too patriotic looking, haha. Keep it up though man.
Yellow would look quite nice. Great job, Jeff. You just reminded me to finish my personal site for web design class.

10-13-2006, 02:32 AM
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another wicked portfolio jeff, maybe add a light purple 1px somehwere to give it a tad bit of variety?

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Sleepy colours.

I like your name as Jeff Andersen better than Jeffery.

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Nice work Jeff, I think it might need a little more padding on the text boxes, the text seems kinda cramped. Also consider getting a little more contrast in there, the site seems very soft, almost bland. It needs a tiny bit of crispness in it, I feel. Colour could be it, but I am not sure.

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Originally Posted by Julian
Nice work Jeff, I think it might need a little more padding on the text boxes, the text seems kinda cramped. Also consider getting a little more contrast in there, the site seems very soft, almost bland. It needs a tiny bit of crispness in it, I feel. Colour could be it, but I am not sure.
Thanks Julian, It seems the problem I'm having with contrast is that on my laptop screen it looks quite blue, but when I've checked it on CRT's at work it appears dull and grey like.

Has anyone that looked at it seen a blue version or is it just my color on my laptop screen?

Regards,

10-13-2006, 10:58 AM
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Originally Posted by Jeff Andersen
Thanks Julian, It seems the problem I'm having with contrast is that on my laptop screen it looks quite blue, but when I've checked it on CRT's at work it appears dull and grey like.

Has anyone that looked at it seen a blue version or is it just my color on my laptop screen?

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Its just you I put it on my CRT and my LCD and saw a similar Mauve-y Blue colour.

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Weird, anyone have an idea as to how I can get my color to appear the same as everyone elses?

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