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I need smoe help with writing

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08-19-2006, 11:20 PM
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Well I am 15, I dont run a buisness, but I do write articles and am membre of lots of forums

I run
http://googolians.blogspot.com/index.html
http://forum-blog.blogspot.com/
http://googolians.net/forum/

And am member of too many forums lol, BUT my problem is that I can write articles fine, but I write them with what I have in mind, I cant seem to dig deeper and get more text out of it. Like This Article from Google about Google Desktop and My Article about it. If you read them, can you see what I mean, I have more to say but I cant really seem to find a way to put it into context. I know someone here ca help me please

08-20-2006, 07:13 AM
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So what is exactly what you are asking for here?

By the way, your grammar is atrocious for a writer.

08-20-2006, 05:13 PM
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Well im 15 and from Puerto Rico, so my English is pretty good I would say, we speak spanish here, what im asking for is some tips for writing articles because I have more things to say but cant quite put them into context

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Do you mean ideas for articles?

08-21-2006, 02:46 AM
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Yeah, but when I get an idea I have more things to say, but cant findd a way to put them into context

look at my blog, youl see that some chunkc of my post are missing

http://googolians.blogspot.com/index.html (look at the ones that say "by Gavilan"

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I'd suggesting reading more - in English. It will help your grammar and spelling, a lot.

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Well im not worried about the gramar because when I am writing an article I take more time and am more careful plus there is spell check

but like I have Said I have more to say but cant find a way to write it

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Yes but spell check wont solve your problems for you. If you want to become more professional in your writing and etc. You must be able to take responsibility of your writing instead of depending Microsoft word spell check. If you truley want to become a decent writer I suggest you start reading professional articles on the web, get inspired and also practice your grammer, or hire a cheap tutor on msn. I could tutor you, for a very cheap price

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I have to agree here, reading more WILL definately help you.

Another technique I use when writing big articles, is to use a mind map...map out all of the important aspects of an article...then prioritise it into areas of importance, then write the article.

Because I have mind mapped and prioritised I can write my article with the most important information at the top, and everything is written in a structured and sequential order.

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Why don't you try creating an outline? Although it works for some, reserving a "map" of the article in your mind is not always recommended. Do what Julian recommended, but actually write it down. When it comes to writing the article, you also need to be familiar with how articles of the same type are written, so I also recommend reading articles online, in magazines, etc.

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