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03-31-2008, 08:12 PM
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Please can I have a critique on my portfolio design. Please note that this is going to be a one page design. I just put it together as I am fed up of showing people zip files.

Please also not that this is my 5th full layout now, so please be constructive.

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One thing to point out there is a error in the header.

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That design is awesome. I love it. Great work Ryan.

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First one is better, don't like the tags...

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I like this layout. Especially the color scheme you're using, quite nice. I will give some constructive criticism because you asked. You are using a boring serif font for your headings on everything, why not just use a nice handwritten font like you're already doing? If not for the main headings At least for the subheadings (Most-Listed.com) Also the subheadings need more contrast against the background.

And the tags aren't a good idea.

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