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02-19-2005, 08:34 PM
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Hi all im back if anyone remembers me lol. Anyway:

This is for a contest on another forum for a hosting site. Some constructive critisims please. Some feedback on the banner would be great do you think it fits in well or does it stick out and look out of place?

updated below

Thanks

02-19-2005, 08:59 PM
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i think your side menus and boxes shouls be the same size and the logo box. i think it also needs a footer.

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I think the left side is far too packed. Perhaps add some space between each plan? My attention is directed to the left and not on the text (seems a little unbalanced) Other than that it's a decent design, not sure where the header fits into the scheme of things though.

02-19-2005, 10:18 PM
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Heres an update:



Does it look any better?

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That looks much better, it balances it out more

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i tink you should put something down the right if that graphic isn't going to go right to the edge. it looks wierd jst ending there.

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Space the content boxes out, still looks over crowed... Also even though you added a footer it still looks like the page doesent end... Use a strong navagation bar with the text placed upon it... At the top you have a small green bar maybe use the same colours and a simular style ?

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the second version is VERY nice, good job

try to make better use of space tho' there is alot of blank areas stil left, other than that its very well done

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Took many of the great suggestions heres v3:

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Very nice design, however, I think that you have too much text here! People when they first come to your website, they need to see your hosting plans. Also, visitors can find it boring when there is a lot of text on a website.

I believe you should leave the first paragraph at the top of this page with a small picture on the right for example then put your plans just underneath this paragraph.

You can have the bottom of the page to display your news, etc.

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