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neoraw - portfolio

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10-07-2007, 06:25 PM
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hi guys..
i'm a bit inspirationless.
i really need a design for my portfolio, so i made this:

http://neoraw.com/Portfolio/neoraw/

i feel like it needs something more, but i don't know what.

so, comments please!

10-07-2007, 09:17 PM
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very minimalistic. i like it :]
maybe add some more contrast in the text.

10-07-2007, 10:18 PM
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I like the simplicity of it. As said above, some more contrast between the text and background would make the design better.

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thanks, i'll change it at the html part
more comments?

10-08-2007, 04:15 PM
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align the bottom previews all the way to the left. the indent throws it off balance.

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I really like it, nice and simple, very effective. I like the colours too.

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I agree with what everyone else said, the copyright text needs more contrast too IMO, just making sure you knew that one. :P

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