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3rd design made.

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01-19-2005, 01:17 AM
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Let me know what you think!!

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No offence, but you can do SO much better with that. You've got all the right ideas, but it all looks a bit too rushed.

Also you need to work on your spelling. I'll leave you to figure out all your grammatical errors.

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yeah, I wasnt working with spelling, mainly design, i would work with spelling later, but ok, ill go and redo some things.

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It's very "big" and this in turn looks bad. It's also very simple....just a few coloured shapes with text on them. I would suggest looking around other sites and getting some inspiration, see how menus, headers and content elements are designed and then try and incorperate some of their ideas into yours.

I guess it just seems very basic and i'm sure you can do much better!

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