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I like the look and your photos. My constructive criticism:
* There are a couple run-on sentences in your first page. I suggest you place a period after the word "homes" in the first paragraph, and start a new sentence from that point. The next two paragraphs would also read better if they were broken up just a bit more. See if you can break one of those long sentences with commas into two separate thoughts.
* From any of the Gallery subpages, the link back to the About page doesn't work. It goes to an error page.
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