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02-24-2009, 03:38 AM
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This is my latest work. i plan on selling it for $20, PSDs, fully coded. i just have to wait until i can post in the market section

let me know what you guys think.

02-24-2009, 12:40 PM
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It looks nice but the red doesn't really fit the picture. Same as the background you have chosen for the red navigation, it just distracts from the header.

As a designer you want the header to stand out, when people visit the website their first notice is the header, but here if I look at the template the first thing that catches my eye is the heavy red with the white border.

I'm not saying it's not nice, but I think you should invest a little more time into color management to see what works out better, but after all this is just an opinion.

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hey man, thanks for the tips, i really appreciate. i will get working on the header.

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Originally Posted by kos View Post
hey man, thanks for the tips, i really appreciate. i will get working on the header.
No problem

It's better to criticize, then saying 'it looks bad' like many people do. I think this is more user friendly and not offensive

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Try using default font that would display when its coded, remove the AA.

Also, the gradient doesn't merge from top to bottom, just sort of breaks in the middle with 2 shades. Doesn't blend in too well.

Work on the rollover to make it match the navigation bar, don't have a plain black rollover.

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