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[FLASH] Sky Professionality.

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06-14-2006, 05:32 AM
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  Old  [FLASH] Sky Professionality.

Cheesey titles don't seem to ever get old.
This flash is more of a professional style, different from my usual flash jobs.
So tell me what you think.

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Thank you.

06-14-2006, 06:06 AM
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It's a good start. I don't think it's quite complete and seems a little empty but it is a good start.

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Ok, what would you suggest? I really don't see any other possibilities to add anything and keep it from looking cramped or overdone.

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The left is very plain with just that icon/logo in my opinion. I'm not sure what I'd put there, maybe text or something?

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The whole animation is very sleek, bright and eye catching but there are a few things that I think could improve it.

Firstly, I think the preloader would look better with an easier to read font, like a Windows default Verdana or something of the sort. Or, better yet, get rid of the "Loading...50%" text entirely and let the boxes do the work.

I think the "Only Way Is To the Sky..." text should be readable as soon as it appears, i.e. without the blur, it made my eyes go a little funny.

The professional businessman is a good choice to give a professional feel, but he does look a little out of place. Maybe try softening the edges of the cutout or something?

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Thanks for the nice write out Mub. I'll see if the client wants these changes.

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