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01-07-2006, 09:11 PM
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http://www.exit13.ca
I'm working on my new site and am looking for suggestions and such.

Updated: Changed Rollovers

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01-07-2006, 09:17 PM
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navigation is horrible, no idea what its going to unless u look at the links in the status bar.

its nice and clean though.

01-07-2006, 09:23 PM
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i like the general concept of it but the terryfox bit just looks totally out of place, i thought the layout had just screwed up in my browser at first.

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looks nice , navigation looks good to me , but it would be nice to know where it leads to :s
and the part where the latest work is , it looks like it's a part of your template :s

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Any suggestions as to how i should re-arrange the latest work?

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navigation is horrible, no idea what its going to unless u look at the links in the status bar.

its nice and clean though.
Agreed. Those images don't 'obviously' say "About Us", "Contact", "Samples" .. etc.

If you want to use the images as navigation, put texts on it which tells the visitor to where it leads.

Also, I couldn't tell if the "Visit my latest finished product (Terry Fox)" image is apart of the header or not ~ took me a while to realise it. Maybe put that inside the content area since the content area has no structure.

What else are you putting on the front page? Right now, I only see some text and the 'latest project'. You should show more information on one page - for example, you can put some samples on the front page too.

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Those images don't 'obviously' say "About Us", "Contact", "Samples" .. etc.
They do , but little.
With the rollover you added to them , it is alot better.
Can't wait to see the logo

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I actually think i'm going to redesign the whole thing. This one just isn't going anywhere for me.

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- Isn't there way too much space for the logo?

- In the title it says exit12, but the domain says 13?!

- Each part (seperated) looks really really good, though, the whole thing now doesn't really fit together.

- Drop the animation in the banner.

- I didn't realise first where the navigation where.

- Nice colors.

Good luck!

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It's looking good, although, the latest project banner is WAY to large, it's starting to look like a header and confused me upon entering. I think atleast scale that down or remove it completly leaving the "click to view my last completed project" clipet.

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