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03-17-2007, 08:39 PM
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Just finished this site for a contest! Would i be able to have some feedback please!

http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/9...ectcopyoz1.jpg

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Thanks JRM

03-17-2007, 09:03 PM
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I think the BG is to dark...

03-17-2007, 09:08 PM
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Originally Posted by BrokenFaith View Post
I think the BG is to dark...
well i wanted the site to kinda blend into the background, just it's some thing different!

03-17-2007, 10:00 PM
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I like the overall design, but to be honest, I think that the text used (the black) is very hard to see. Try a lighter color.

03-17-2007, 10:19 PM
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Originally Posted by Feren6 View Post
I like the overall design, but to be honest, I think that the text used (the black) is very hard to see. Try a lighter color.
Agreed. The content of a site should be the most important part, and making that hard to see is not good.

I would make the small black font a bit larger, and lighter than the background.

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Originally Posted by Digit View Post
Agreed. The content of a site should be the most important part, and making that hard to see is not good.

I would make the small black font a bit larger, and lighter than the background.
Check the revions

03-18-2007, 07:26 AM
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i think what hurts it is having the dark blue background then a huge white square for your logo, try and put the logo on the dark blue background.

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Yea i'm also not a fan of the Dark background, it looks to dark and when blending in to the background makes it loose it's structure.

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i think its looks good m8 and with the text white now even better

good job

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It definitely looks better, but I still can't read that black text very well. I'd change that to a dark gray or even a green or something. As for the login box, I just don't think it fits right. I'd either fix it up a bit and make it fit, or make it like the "find leads" box and whatnot.
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