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05-28-2007, 12:21 PM
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Theres many parts that i don't like, but could you guys tell me what you think..

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05-28-2007, 12:58 PM
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I think it looks pretty good, but the ordening isn't right.
The form looks weird in the middle of the design...

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is pink shampoo the name?

it looks like you've tried splicing two pages into one, but i really don't think it's working. the information architecture doesn't make sense. home = info + work samples? that's bad. it's too many different kinds of information (who we are, what we do and all the samples).

05-28-2007, 01:07 PM
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The form fill in section looks jsut out of place, nice design but could do with abit more work on it.

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Okay, forget every thing under the what we do..


What now ?

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Not bad, kinda plain though. And change the contact section, those boxes are way to big and bad looking. Keep working on it, very plain as I scroll down the design.

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I think your sevrices in the banner should be the second most importan thing in it and stand out and top of the banner would need some sort of bar/line not to be bug just to show where your site starts.

What we do section could have a rounded content box in it with no effects mayb gloss or w/e with a darker colour in it to make that stand out also.

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