Heartcrush Second T-Shirt Design

Many saw my first, I want to show off my second, which came in today, tell me what you think!

Detailed Version:
http://www.click2host.us/006/hearthand258840.jpg

Actual Shirt:
http://www.click2host.us/001/HPIM0462236423.jpg
http://www.click2host.us/003/HPIM0461197215.jpg

What do you guys think?

I am also thinking about printing some stickers, if I did, the sticker would look like:
http://www.click2host.us/005/Sticker959276.png

What do you think?

Hah, that's great.. not something I would wear though.

I noticed both of our t-shirts have both been somewhat 'dark' and 'down'

So I am working with someone here to get a design that more people would be interested in, but thanks for the words AJ..

I think im going to print some stickers too, with the sticker looking like:

http://www.click2host.us/005/Sticker959276.png

What do you think?

I dislike the serif font, I say get rid of the second "Heartcrush" on the right, and just put a tag line describing you in a few words "Clothes'r'us" (Just kidding, but you get the point I hope).

I was thinking about putting a tagline, or quote, but we dont have one, and I dont know what to say.. so I just put Heartcrush again..

Kinda morbid-like... makes me feel like a serial killer is stalking me. So if that's what you are aiming for..good job...if not... not good..lol.

Well, we are 'targeting' the indie/scene/emo/music kids..

And I know, our next 2 or three t-shirts are going to be a lot 'lighter' themed.

Originally Posted by deviant_designer Kinda morbid-like... makes me feel like a serial killer is stalking me. So if that's what you are aiming for..good job...if not... not good..lol.

I feel the same.

Alright, thanks for the input guys, Ill start toning them down :P

Hmm...not sure I like that design. I wasn't too keen on the first one so I hope you get some nicer designs. Of course, I'm really picky about what I'm gonna spend my money on.