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02-23-2007, 01:58 AM
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http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/9...iceeditny6.jpg

That is in my dads backyard and since it is so cold here it froze, but some of the ice has melted.

Let me know what you guys think.

02-23-2007, 02:21 AM
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Ehh, well I would hate to have that back yard :P

02-23-2007, 03:06 AM
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It's quite nice for your first attempt, but the blurry black around the image looks very bad. I think you need to change that maybe even try a white color.

Good attempt mate, keep it up.

02-24-2007, 01:54 AM
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wow honestly from me it looks amazing.

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The photos alright, but lacks a sense of focus.. Not necessarily a bad thing but just an observation.

Also, the lighting looks very irregular. Some parts of the snow look overexposed and other parts look too dark.

Nonetheless, a good attempt.

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I think it's a really good photo, but is spoiled by that blurry border, good job.

02-24-2007, 04:46 PM
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Thanks for all the comments guys

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