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11-20-2009, 12:19 AM
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Hello, I'm Ruben and I live in the Netherlands. I'm an 17 year old student and I'm studying for DTP-er. Recently we had too make a webtemplate for homework, so I made one and thought "mmm... maybe I can try to sell this design".

I want to have a clear view from some other persons, so I'm asking you to please leave some constructive critism.

This design is based on the new game NFS Shift:

http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/1976/58141784.jpg

Please rate!!!! Thank you

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It's very simple and often people want a sidebar they can put things.

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Sidebar, and maybe a bit more spacing and colour?

Also, it appears you cropped the bottom off

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Originally Posted by twincircuits View Post
Sidebar, and maybe a bit more spacing and colour?

Also, it appears you cropped the bottom off
Sidebar as in banners or links? And if the template would be coded, then the place were all the headings come and stuff like that, would repeat itself till the end of the page.

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The page looks like it is cut off at the end, there is no footer or even a graceful ending to the content. I like the colors though, the background is really good.

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Okay so I should make a footer for the end of the page. I think the colors are alright but thats just my opinion, hope there are more people that can critisize my work so I can finish this design

Thanks for all those that commented already

(sorry for my bad english, I try to make it as clear as possible)

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