Originally Posted by slavingia
The grammar is just horrible, here's an example: "Also a reportedly gain that pownce was going under, and would help for faster completion of Kwyno....More about the news" <- the sentence ends abruptly with not even a period.
I can't even decipher what that's supposed to say.
A lot of the design seems like it's not 100% there yet. Here: http://www.slavingia.com/etc/b5ee799...233117420d.png
The spacing is not effective. And the random white include doesn't match at all with the design of the site.
Here: http://www.slavingia.com/etc/b5ee799...233117420d.png
Nothing is properly aligned, and the twitter message is completely in the wrong place (I think).
Here: http://www.slavingia.com/etc/96ea925...d8d56f9d6c.png
Completely unstyled form and the captcha entry box is the same width as the username/email fields so I didn't even realise what it's purpose was for way too long.
Again, just trying to help.
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kwyno post. my fault there, it was written before school in a rush. completely my fault.
The first grabup; The techcrunch widget, honestly don't even know why I included. To say the least though the paragraph directly under it states that the widget reads the /css and our font is white.
second grabup; Is the first as the same ( i think you might have tired to paste to fast), from what I see, the alignment is all the same from that screenshot. It might depend on your browser, as I am using firefox ( mac ) I have asked for screenshots of IE or Firefox (windows).
third grabup; That is a plugin, I am having a custom contact form made to better suit me needs.
again, these are just my thoughts. I agree with most things people say and although I post my ideas I am working to change things to better help the community ( you guys ) based on the comments.
You and I are just the same, do not put yourself lower, and your comments are the same as everyone else. Now to add to what you said I have talked to coder and he did forget the background pattern, and some small things that will be added tonight.
But to be completely honest, over the past couple days I have fell away from the design and I feel the dark colors do not fit the site.
So there might be more changes even to come.
Again, Thanks for all the comments.