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09-30-2006, 12:20 PM
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Ok guys this was just a 2 minute design for now just so I could get something online, but what you guys think of layout and easyness?

http://leejriley.com/leejriley

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09-30-2006, 12:43 PM
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I think the text is far too small. You have all this free room, yet you still use tiny text. I wouldn't read a sentence of anything with font that small.

Layout isn't bad.

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So make the text larger ok then thanks.

09-30-2006, 01:58 PM
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Try and align everything up. Right now the content is not correctly positioned along with the header. Since you've not added any sections to the site it's inportant to align everything to give it a sense of structure.

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its preety cool but i think you need to add some stuff to all the blank space.

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the header is beautiful i find, its so simple and easy to look at. only thing you could improve there is to make the 'graphic and web design' align with your name. the different widths make it appear slightly disorganized.

i have to agree with everyone else, there's a lot of white space that could be filled. the menu is a little spaced out (and the text is very small), though i love the drop-down navigation idea, and the little icons beside the links.

overall, a good draft. keep at it!

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The text is a little too small, maybe you could add a nav bar on the side, might make it look better but the coding is nice as well. Nice one.

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Well guys thanks for you're comments, I've already started on v2 this was just to get something online thats all.

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It's not even much of a design, it's a list for a navigation with some javascript effect, some text, and a quick logo.. you didn't even make the icons.

Lets hope v2 is more of a design.

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hehe

very empty, but its pretty cool. I think it's missing 'something'

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