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05-10-2005, 04:07 PM
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Hey,
I've done this a while now but I could use some feedbacks. I also just moved it to new host and got new domain so any bugs let me know.

http://www.dvision.ws

05-11-2005, 07:29 AM
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The site is very aesthetically pleasing, I love the background footer image.

The problems I have with your site are:

1. The speed of your site to load is very slow, check this report: http://www.websiteoptimization.com/s...olio/websites/

2. Your sites HTML does not validate, check this report: http://validator.w3.org/check?verbos.../portfolio.php

3. The fonts used in the top navigation and content headers are too small and too hard to clearly read.

4. The text is VERY hard to read, the red-orange you have used does not contrast well with black. Some of the links are almost impossible to read.

5. Don't put your age or your experience in the site. No one needs to know this information unless they ask.

6. You could have had a better header, even used one of your great images from your portfolio.

Overall I like the concept but not how you have brought it all together. You portfolio work is really great, keep it up!

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I agree with Julian on most points.

I also don't care for the photoshop image (on the tutorials page). It seems out of place.

Great job but you can always improve

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Thanks. It once validated but after the move of server, and a few changes...i guess it went back haywire. I'll take some time and fix it up back. I don't know about the links being hard to read but i guess for some ppl it is but I'll work on changin the color to a brighter one. I'll do that when I'm bored and have nothing to do cuz that doesn't pay me...lol. Thanks alot for the review guys...ooh...that photoshop image for tuts...thanks...i'll move it cuz it's too much work...one of the reasons i'm not adding any...lol.

Thanks all.

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i think its very nice. easy to read and has what a portfolio needs good work

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I like it!

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Thanks...
Validation...there main page is done and now the rest will do later...ppl only validate main page when review..lol.
http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=ht...Fportfolio.php

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Hey there!

I really love the colours you used What a great scheme!

I'm not digging the animated affiliates section though, that brings it down a tone imo. It's got this cool retro feel which I like, don't see that everyday!

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