Two templates

I am going to try to sell these soon, critique all you want! And give em an idea of what I could sell them at too.

http://www.incuzox.com/portfolio/michelle/


http://www.incuzox.com/portfolio/brownclan

I like the colours in the first design, but the white font near the top is quite hard to read, the overlays are pretty sexi. The loading times in both desings arent so good though even with broadband.

The second design would probably look better if it had a more lively colour theme, not brown .

But nice work.

Yea, I noticed It was hard to read too, but I can't seem to find a good color that will fit the scheme and be quite readable. Maybe if I were to add a drop shadow, or make it a tad bit bigger with a stroke? Eh, who knows. Thanks for the review broken vault, and come on guys help me out here reveiw these sites.