Jamin Dunn Site Design

Here's what I've been working on the past day. Still a work in progress, but figured it could use some feedback before I finish it up.

UPDATE ONE: Moved the polaroid up and fixed the middle image

Very nice brush work looks awesome

Looking pretty good. Some things I'd change:

- At first glance, the photo of the chin (in a denim coat) looked like someone's belly in jeans. I would change the pic, or include more of the face so that people don't confuse it with someone's hairy belly.

- The top-right corner of the "polaroid" is at a tangent with the top edge of the page. This is often a no-no in design, because it draws a lot of un-needed attention and it breaks the flow of the design. I'd move the polaroid up just a bit, so that its top-right corner is cropped by the edge of the page.

- I think a dark-gray background would work better here, instead of white.

AntiChav, thanks a lot man.

EEight, I agree with the first two points. I didn't even really notice the polaroid problem, I should've been able to pick that out. The comment about the hairy belly made me laugh, hahaha. It was randomly placed there to be used as filler, but I fixed it. The white background on the linked page isn't final. The design will be full browser-width once it's done. What is up right now is just a screenshot from photoshop.

I fixed those two things. You can look by clicking here.

Looks great. I would just add some grunge-ness to the left side of the face picture (where the "belly" once was).

Sounds good man, I'll add that Monday.