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10-13-2006, 01:13 AM
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Kind of a site I have created for kind of all areas. Features news, inspiration sites, portfolio, contact method, and more stuff like that. I can take criticism so have at it! It's just the frontpage, haven't done anything besides the frontpage.

http://www.twelve41.com/

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I love it! I'll give a better post later, I'm sorta busy. But I just had to say, I love it.

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^ funny you say that, immediately thought of you after seeing it.

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I love the web2.0ness.

Very nice indeed.

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Just an update if you are using Internet Explorer, I forgot to check it before I put it up so I will try to get that updated soon.

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Look'n really nice man. I like how simplistic it is. Nice colors too. Maybe a little too simplistic, but I'd rather it be too simplistic than too busy.

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I love it, but I think the content could fair better if it was closer together...or if each of the modules were a bit wider. Theres so much empty and wasted space.

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the twelve41 image doesn't stick in my head.

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Wow, love it bud.

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I like the general feel of your site, you have used colours very well and to good effect but there are a few small areas that I feel need some work.

The mock client stands out more than your identity, as northpark has said your logo isn't memorable, therefore you have no identity at all. You may need to look more deeply into this, or just don't have something bigger and redder than your logo in the content of your main page

Bryan commented on there being too much wasted space, I don't think this space is wasted, simply unnecessary. Whitespace is a great tool, but there is too much in this instance. You could spread the content modules out a little more, let them breathe a bit.

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