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Two designs, Critique?

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02-26-2006, 08:16 PM
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Hey everyone,
Just looking for some comments / critique on my two latest designs.

Versed Media
http://www.exit13.ca/portfolio/versedmedia.jpg

ZoneServ
http://www.exit13.ca/portfolio/zoneserv.jpg

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02-26-2006, 08:18 PM
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Nice corporate and clean looking designs, well done

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I am a big fan of the versed media design, the colours work nicely and it has a very professional feel to it. I would loose the flowing gradients in the header however.

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I like the colors you use on your designs.

They are nice and clean, well layed out. Easy to read everything.
Good job!

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2nd one is much better. Good job.

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Two technically sound designs there, nice job.

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2nd one is nice looking, however the first one feels done-before.

the silver tosses it off, use the grey.

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Prefer the second one also, the first one is clean aswell but i'd get rid of the box behind the 'versed media' text.

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Thanks for the comments everyone .

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