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Originally Posted by Salathe View Post
The actual content and some of the design decisions are really letting you down.

For the text on your page, I'd heartily suggest hiring a professional writer because I know at the moment you're going for "kind of casual" but actually getting bland and generic. There are also a number of grammar and spelling mistakes which any company, however casual, should do well to avoid.
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