don't get me wrong, the articles have great information but the grammar and word use is horrible. example:

Lets face it, you wouldn't want a possible client coming into your office, looking around at a mess, so why would you send them to your virtual office looking like one?

possible fix:
Let's face it, you wouldn't want a prospective client to come by your office and see it in shambles. So, why would you send them to your virtual office in the same condition?

grammar deals with the commas and periods and such, which you need some help with. take a look, also, at alternative words that may be better or more effective in your article. i understand you are only 20 years old. but, you are presenting yourself as a business owner, an entrepeneur, and in the event that a prospective client who is older inquires about your business, with bad grammar and poor word usage, you can lose him before you even finish your first sentence. food for thought.