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12-04-2008, 11:42 AM
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The grammar is just horrible, here's an example: "Also a reportedly gain that pownce was going under, and would help for faster completion of Kwyno....More about the news" <- the sentence ends abruptly with not even a period.

I can't even decipher what that's supposed to say.

A lot of the design seems like it's not 100% there yet. Here: http://www.slavingia.com/etc/b5ee799...233117420d.png

The spacing is not effective. And the random white include doesn't match at all with the design of the site.

Here: http://www.slavingia.com/etc/b5ee799...233117420d.png
Nothing is properly aligned, and the twitter message is completely in the wrong place (I think).

Here: http://www.slavingia.com/etc/96ea925...d8d56f9d6c.png
Completely unstyled form and the captcha entry box is the same width as the username/email fields so I didn't even realise what it's purpose was for way too long.

Again, just trying to help.